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All Comments on 'Doing Daisy and Donna'

by adamlily1972

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WTF

Got no idea what this is about

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
dear annony, if you don't understand this maybe , just maybe

you should reead comic books! God what a dumbass. 5 for a good INCEST story

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
The

first 1/4 page suck so bad I didn't read the rest.

RapidResponderRapidResponderover 8 years ago
Terrible

Nothing more need be said.

pink_pantiespink_pantiesover 8 years ago
Lacks Good Editing

This story needs further editing. You should have waited for days before submitting this, correcting things and rewriting them. 3/4 of your story needs rewriting. I wanted to read everything. I didn't. I only read the first page.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
One star rating

Come on everybody. If we try hard, we can get this story below 3.0

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