All Comments on 'Doing Jordan and Andy'

Another lazy author that doesn't use quotation marks for dialog.

Yeah, yeah, yeah.... that's the way the British do it. Sorry, but that doesn't fly. When I read actual stories (or even a news article) written by a Brit, they use proper quotation marks for dialog.

...Forgetting the matter of "eleven and twelve inch, PLUS, cocks." ...Putting aside the issue of being told his friend and that friend's mom were sexually active. ...IGNORING the sudden sexual activity between a mom and her son that occurs out of the fucking blue. He tells his mom about getting his dick sucked by his male teammate, and getting that same teammate's cock up his ass, and she doesn't even bat an eye, or even ask the question that would be uppermost if this story had even a passing resemblance to realism: "Son, do you think you might be gay or possibly bisexual? Are you still interested in girls?" Not to insult or to judge the son, but any parent is going to be at least fucking CURIOUS about something like that.

But like my first example with the "foot long cocks", this story isn't even vaguely, distantly or remotely believable, so who really gives a shit?

You suck