All Comments on 'Doing Mom'

All I can say is - what a story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A very erotic story,non political and not a bloody vampire or other weird thing in sight ,well done.

I read this story years ago and it was by Jack Paterno, and possibly revised by Jason Bourney, if my facts are correct. If this was an intentional rewrite to expand the original, then you should have given credit to the original author. I haven't read this whole version, so I can't give feedback on the new stuff. I just think it would be good to give credit where credit's due.

This story came from my own tiny mind. To the best of my knowledge, I've not read another quite like it...

My writing is, like everyone else's, a compilation of memories...if there's something similar, its coincidental, and not intended.

you have got to continue with this story please. it is so sexuaLLY stimulating and i have had a hard on since i started this story. maybe continue with the two of them getting the last sister and then the two sisters at the same time

All stories no matter who the author is reflect experiences ,times ,places etc.To the last poster you might as well say all stories on a particular theme have been"stolen",you can only make that statement if the story is verbatim of the so called original,and this is not.Perhaps you would like to define more clearly when a story in your opinion is stolen,then we would all know where to draw the line.Iliked this a great deal ,and I am sure the author will ignore your comment and carry on.JIM

that was amazing. now we just need chapter 2, to tie all the women in together and it will be by far the best story on here. well done.

This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking by a gifted writer. The two boys are cousins and totally liberated when it comes to sex. One boy is the lady's nephew, the other, Sam, Jr., her own son, but both want to get their young dick up the lady's cunt! Why the heck not? It's family cunt and should be available to the hard young cocks of the family! The world would be a much happier place if mothers would finally admit their need for stiff family prick--none stiffer!--especially for what their own boy's got jumping around in his pants. A mother knows that her young son's got a pair of hot young balls with PLENTY of creamy semen sloshing around in them, rich young semen he's dying to give his beloved mother--right up her twat! Mothers admire and secretly lust for what their virile manly boy's got waiting for them in that heavy sack between his strong young legs. A mother's wet cunt and her boy's stiff fat prick--made for each other!

It's always the same MO for the 2 cousins to fuck a woman. Drive-in and wine. All happen so fast, there are none build up. Where is the tension rising?

I like it but it's not one of my favorite.

You fucked mom sense less. You took your sister to drive in. Abused her three holes.

Took your other sister maid and treated like a whore rode her hard and put hèr away wet. They sense the sister home knowing she has the same geans as mom and sister. Maybe she need her mouth fucked her pussy licked and her ass reamed. Their dad didn't get to sample his girls juices flowing on his dick.

OH MY YOU MAY HAVE TO WRITE More. And his cousin has a mom and sister to fuck. A lot more material. I HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD DAY.

I'd like to see Sami get some and maybe a huge orgy including dad. I liked this work a ton but the start and finish seem to just abruptly start and end. I can imagine the mom's seduction based on some key points in the story, but the title indicates they boys have sex with both sisters! You have an excellent middle piece to build a trilogy!!

Or at least you need to update you "extended" title

Doing Mom — ('n sis, 'n the nanny, 'n sis, 'n the neighbors)

So far it's just been Mom, Older Sis, and the Nanny. No younger sis, no neighbors.

opening seemed to be a second chapter and did not see a first,

I am a new reader here.

so far story is good, but what peaked my interest was who was taking pictures behind the fence as it had happened two times, the flash of light between the boards of fence. when the boys was fucking sister in the yard, mom and dad was up stairs fucking at the time it happened so who was spying on them and taking pics? i don't know if anyone else picked up on it.Surely it wasn't sister's hubby having his wife followed by a PI cause he thinks she is a prude when it comes to sex.Another thing, also how would that person know to have a camera ready to take pics in case someone was having sex in a yard with a high fence, was dad suspecting wife of cheating and having her followed? i am wondering where you are going with that.

You have got to have the next chapters 2 to 5. Man this was a great damn read. From start to finish....

Well, from looking at the comments to this story,it would appear this author has "gone-to-ground", so to speak, since many of the comments are sssooo old...

What a shame, you really had a streak gong, with the 4 pages to this story...still 1 sister at home to "take out & entertain"...maybe more to develop.

This was a hot story...I really appreciated the start, I had to check to make sure there was not something as a prequel...Mom is a firecracker, and loves to fuckboth boys, then HER HUSBAND!!

The whole family is NASTY,but fun...would seriously like to see another!!

**5** stars...

This may be a homage of a 2 part story Mom, My Cousin & Me written a long time ago, do not believe it is on Literotica, you can guess the storyline from this work. Usually appears if your search. Last author info I've seen is "Based upon a story By Jack Paterno. Revised and expanded by Jason Bourney."

Remember in that story his dad Tim and uncle died in a car wreck. He knocked up his mother. both sisters and aunt. I know as I wrote everything from chapter 3 on.

I posted Mom, My Cousin & Me on SOL.