All Comments on 'Doing My Brother'

Reads a lot like a repost.....I'm sure I read this one before here.

No, not a repost, as I would have noted it somewhere if that were true. I did write another story some years ago with a similar theme. It does happen, every so often - you've written something before and a variation on that idea comes to mind. I'd written a story with a brother / sister couple that are closer in age, the sister takes control of the brother's life and turns it around. If that is the one you are thinking of, that's fine. However, this one is 100% new, written a few days ago. I no longer have my original notes to the other tale handy (virus wiped out all my files several months ago) but this is a new piece with some twists and turns.

Another great story from you. Is there a Chapter 2?

Great story hope their is a second chapter.

No bro/sis sex = no incest

Bro fucks sis's friend = no taboo

Why is this story in this category?

Shallow characters and plot = boring

Your time and effort = 2 stars

I deleted one negative comment. For the record - if you leave a negative comment (or an insulting one) without telling what it was you didn't like - you get deleted. As you can see, there is still a negative comment here - but the author did vocalize what they disliked.

IF there is even incest implied in a story, it is supposed to be at least listed in the tags. It is planned to have more chapters and those will include incest, hence the designation. Be a little patient readers, I don't always want to show my hand too early in the game.

Waiting for the two of them together! One small thing...had to go back more than once as it seemed Julie kept being used instead of Jaime at certain times.

i hope you expand on this store i would like to know what happens at the parties and with brother and sister more?

Good storyline .Can't wait for the next chapter to see if he nails his sister.

Wish I was her brother pleasuring all the lovely woman. Nothing comes close to that here in Austalia. NYC here I cun

This is one well written story - arousing - very HOT and got to the details well. It will be really interesting to read the next chapter on how Keith does and who he gets first; his sister or Jamie upon graduation !!

Oh my god Brett you have no fucking limits. This story is so fucking sexy my girl friends and I are acting it out and will continue to do so till we can not suck and fuck anymore, until that is we are rested and ready to go again, and get so blissed up that we pass out, due to the insane pleasure of total fuck lust, cunt lust and cum lust. More and more of this please, lots moe and soon.

Depraved cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's uk.

Really enjoyed the story, and look forward to future installments. Personally, I'd keep the sister Julie in a bit of a slow burn, listening to the sounds from the guest bedroom as her brother Keith works through his training, getting more and more hot for him as time goes on but wanting him to "graduate" first... leading eventually to Jamie giving Keith to her, and sharing their first time with the siblings.