by Dani_Doll
Well done, great beginning to what I hope to be a series I can look forward to.
You made me cum twice while reading, would love to be "Samantha", please keep on writing!!
Keep the story rolling..Please More 120 cigarettes..cum slit insertion..Good beginning..
Thank you.
Very well written..
Hope to read more..
Waiting to see where you go with this!
You write very well and I really want to see want to see what happens
This is very well set-up and intriguing. I look forward to the sequel
I REALLY ENJOYED THE DOLL HOUSE,I HOPE YOU PLAN ON WRITING MORE ON THE STORY
Interesting, very interesting. Well thought out, written, and presented.
Sign me up, you can keep the million dollars....just let me be her doll :)
Thanks for the new aspect of being starved for air. I found it to be very arousing and with a little nipple play as I was reading it was pleasuring. I want to tell you that I can roll my tongue sideways and I hopefully will qualify for the job as your doll. Please call me. The whole thing appeals to me. Thank you. I inadvertantly read part 2 first and I loved it too. The blood was also pleasing to me. Please write more. You have a talent. xxxxxooooo!!!!!
Your pacing is gold, you characterizations are appealing and somewhat relatable. Looking forward to seeing how this series fleshes out.
Mmmmm very enticing story.. Looking forward to further chapters of it!!! I love it and two three of my favorite things, smoking and crossdressing and forced feminization
I’ve been reading stories for over 40 years and this is the BEST I’ve ever had the pleasure to read. I only wish I were younger and could meet Miss Sterling and the rest of her group. I would surely like to be one of her gurls