All Comments on 'Doll House - The Salon Pt. 01'

an excellent chapter. Well done!

Thank you verry much..

Please keep the story going...

Loved reading about the tranformation and feminization..

Beutiful...

Love it.. Thank you..

Great detail..look forward to more (5).

I think I stopped breathing during that - phew! Please keep going.

The pacing of the suspense is just right, but Sam shows no fear or resistance to what anyone would deem as a precarious situation. Which could lead to rather dull chapters ahead. Also More background on Veronica Sterling would be much appreciated.

Adoring this story so far. More please :)

Something simple unexpectedly erotic...I await the next experience!

Blood play is a very specific fetish that not a lot of people like (including me). By adding it to another fetish, forced feminization, you risk turning off a portion of the audience you gained from your first story. I think this is born out by the drop in rating from the first part to the second. I hope you get back on track with your next installment because you had a great start. Happy writing!

Did not expect the blood, it was an adventure, definitely invoked emotional response in me. Not good or bad.. just.. different. fun read! really set in the terror Samantha is about to face. I'm looking forward to the rest!

I feel like I've read this already... However, I am curious if there's going to be more than the two chapters.

I loved it. The introduction of blood made me stand up in sensuousness. I haven't experienced this before and I thank you for introducing me to it. I want more. Thanks a million and Call me. I want to come to your house.

Omg, where is part two? I'm breathless!