All Comments on 'Dollars and Sins Ch. 01'

Interesting concept, a mind control story told from the POV of the mother being mind controlled. There's something very sexy about her being bought off so cheaply yet still desiring her son so strongly, even though she realizes what's going on. Loved all the passionate kissing between mother and son. Stuffing the ones into her bra and making out on his lap was very sexy too. Looking forward to chapter 2!

Great concept & well written

why write two pages and leave it there? do you think people can't digest more than two pages? the thing is when I see 2nd part I'll have to read 1st one to get into it.

Enjoyed the little bit you just tantalized us with, don't stop now.

Holy fuck, what a great story! Very unique, and quite funny in bits. Especially the mom's inner voice. "Because ... his legs must not work as well as hers."

Brilliant.

I can't wait for chapter 2, where, hopefully, "Mr. Caldwell" will show his mom how far a dollar can go when it comes to him.

And as the first commentator mentioned, I absolutely LOVED the heavy necking between mom and her son.

I gave this 5 stars. Thanks for writing this.

P.S. I don't know what you have in mind for subsequent chapters, but... please don't introduce any unnecessary characters that get in the way of mom-son loving.

Looking forward to see how this clever premise plays out. Write in your own style and at your own pace, don't try to please everyone because you cant!

Thanks for sharing your talents with us

... your intro got a chuckle out of me. An X rated version of The Twilight Zone eh?. Hopefully this episode will have a happy end.

Childish and sexless. *

I love the idea of the bills controlling her its super hot

You have the hook in my mouth, but it hasn't been set yet. I can't tell if you are a good fisherman or if the hook is going to be spit out and the fish escape.

So far this is a great story. Please continue it.

But I think mother Madolyn has a point. Even when a boy is fucking the living shit out of his mother--as every son should be doing, just to find out what that hairy hole between mom's thighs feels like when he's pumping his hard young cock up into it--he should never call her by her first name. That is definitely disrespectful. The kid should always call her "mom" or "mommy." As in, "mommy, how does your baby boy's big dick feel up the same cunt I came out of?" That would show the respect due from a son to his beloved mother who gave birth to him.

Great start to a story. I actually love the pace. The buildup is excellent. I do hope you come up with a good explanation of the dollars, it's more important to the story than the sex. Not that the sex isn't important.

Nice concept, well written. So we look forward to more ...

this is in the wrong category. any time the Tags include humiliation and magic it has crossed into other genre.

Could there be a better use for a little black magic? I think not. I wonder if the effect is only temporary? I look forward to finding out the answers to these questions and more, if the price is right.

Quick. We need the next parts asap!

Great, suspenseful story, just nee a CLIMACTIC ending for both of them!!!

Going to read the continuation

Great story. I like your use of prose. I personally would've spent a little longer describing Madelyn's physical attributes, but great story so far.

while I enjoy incest stories. this one was not my type story.

Omg there’s a part 2! Killin me

you took away the incest part when you start taking away mom, mother, mama, mummy and replace it with Madolyn instead