All Comments on 'Dollars and Sins Ch. 06'

This series is easily one of the most creative and fun mom-son erotica I've ever read. Every chapter is a pleasure to read, especially Madolyn's inner thoughts which are funny as hell.

Two minor quibbles I have:

1) The sex was too sudden and too quick. Would have preferred if their first time had been Rob taking Madolyn on their bed slowly and passionately, instead of the quickie in the kitchen.

2) Personal opinion but I'm not too enthused about the sister arriving on the scene.

Nevertheless, this is an outstanding story and I have no hesitation in giving it 5 stars.

this a great wind-up but the sex part was very quick. great writing style . in the space of a page he fucked her 4 times ? maybe should of fucked her once the whole page? has he gone down on her yet ?

... with both previous readers: it's a great series, but after all that build-up, the sex was way too quick.

excellent story, love the degradation of mom, especially as she starts to do it to herself. agree that more time could have been spent on the sex. I have to disagree with previous commenter re sister, it has lots of potential. one scene could be give sis a dollar to not discuss in house activities, and then bring mom out to continue her humiliation in front of daughter. many other ideas abound. looking forward to further chapters.

It was great story although sex scene was rather short. Perhaps you could write sequel with Bob's sister?

She could earn a lot by getting knocked up by her son!

Besides, no mother/son incest story is really complete without the seeding of the mother by the son!

6 chapters to get to the fuck and its like "then he fucked her". Very disappointing. Wont bother with the last chapter.

got to be one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Nice build and finish.

I just hope that one day you'll come back and finish this story. Thanks.