All Comments on 'Domestic Wife Ch. 01'

by pinkcandy99

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lovely.......

Truly lovely 5 stars

InnocentlyDirtyInnocentlyDirtyalmost 6 years ago
Loved it!

I can’t wait to read more!!!

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11almost 6 years ago
Deliciously delightful

Great start

Looking forward to reading your next chapter

Titoo97Titoo97almost 6 years ago
Keep it up!!!!!

Great story. Loved it from start till end. Waiting to read more of it. Well written. Classic Work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful and Sensual

Thank you for writing this story! I love the pacing. So many great elements - her submission and her virginal awakening sexual desire; his dominance and his kindness and patience. I also liked your story starting with a full description of her new surroundings. I'm looking very forward to more of your writings!

pinkcandy99pinkcandy99almost 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you all for the positive feedback! Hopefully I'll finish the next chapter soon!

Happy reading!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I'm in love with that story!

I can't wait to read next chapter! I totally adore your style of writing and the whole plot.

Dry_opinionDry_opinionover 5 years ago
Wonderful beginning

Excellent pace. A slow sexual build-up with enough interactions to learn about the characters. Nicely done.

ToranAllairesToranAllairesover 3 years ago

Very good beginning! I love the detail paid to the period - there aren't many BDSM stories set in this time frame. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
What a beautiful story!

Thank you, pinkcandy99! I've read many other pieces by you and love your style of writing. You are very considerate to your readers and caring of your characters. I admire that very much. I love how the husband shows his care and love. And I look forward to reading more and more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

oh wow such gentle sweet submission you are awsome

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of life’s great pleasures, discovering what feels good. I love the setting and have avoided the urge to look up historical facts, so suspension of disbelief is in full swing. It’s delightfully debauched. 5 ⭐️

Tess (uk)

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