All Comments on 'Dominant Species Ch. 25-28'

Good luck on your surgeries. Just the time between this installment and the last was hard to endure. Months to go now. Ah well, have a good holiday season and I'll await the story continuing next year.

It appears Reggie will have to alpha challenge his father. Assuming he would as he's the only person that could quell this. Otherwise Richard will kill the town. There isn't enough time for shifts to complete.

You couldn't decide in the beginning between boy and girl; you kept shifting.

This confuses the reader.

Though this is a good story and only one I've just come upon in the middle so it seems, there is a lot of confusion and jumping around.

Yes, Marcus broke the law but as Lisa and others are trying to tell Alpha Richard, Marcus is a healer and as a former human, has the tendency to do what is morally right and accepting the consequences. How many times has mankind benefited from moral righteousness? Abolishing slavery, giving women the right to vote, etc.

And thinking practically, Marcus is the only healer around. If he is killed, what happens the next time a wolf needs medical care? While the turned humans will need care, food, and shelter (draining the pack's resources), once they are well, they will contribute to the pack's well-being. They may have different skill and ideas that will benefit the pack as life won't be normal for awhile.

I'm frankly shocked that Alpha Richard issued the kill order without thinking through the consequences. Besides, is he willing to kill all the turned humans as well? Is mass murder the answer? I'm guessing someone will persuade him to change his mind or someone more reasonable will challenge him for the Alpha position.

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PS. Best wishes on the surgeries and getting through the work commitments. Looking forward to an update next year.

Thank you for this chapter it is OUTSTANDING ! Excellent read ! Talk about leaving a cliff hanger . But I wait impatiently (as usual ) for your next chapter .

I hope your surgery goes well and your recovery is speedy . This is one of my favorite series I went back and reread the first chapters last night and this morning . I personally like the way you write so yes I am hooked , I have read your other series and " Saved by my Mate " so yes I am hooked . With this rest period you my just have time to jot down a few ideas for future chapters . Thanks for the GREAT read and Luna watch over you in your time of need .

Tx Cracker

Enjoying this story immensely, I remember when you first posted 'Behind the line of the were wars' I couldn't read past the first chapter because of all things i didnt like the location silly i know, still i shy away from it now but maybe I'll try again since we are in for a long pause until the next chapter of 'DS'.

I can appreciate and read this story well enough without any confusion, if i wanted a perfectly edited story in front of me i go to the library or buy the hard cover and wouldn't gripe about something given for free. Just sayin.....

Great story!!! Just have to say this, Alpha Richard is a dick wad!!!

You lost me at the part where someone miscarried. Was it Silvia or Abigail? While I don't mind going back to previous chapters for a reread, it is frustrating to have to go back to look for a specific part in a story just to make sense of what is currently going on.

Also, I hope Richard's POV about keeping their existence from humans is explained soon. Judging from your title and the first chapter alone, one can assume that the setting of this story is a post-apocalyptic one where law and order, or any form of human governance is nonexistent. Why then, is he still so concerned? As an alpha I'd expect him to have a little more common sense. I get the feeling that he's not all there.

Overall, a really great story. Wishing you well and looking forward to the next chapter.

This is a result of the brutal rape she endured prior to being saved. Sorry about the mistakes in flipping the names, I submitted corrected chapters but they have been awaiting approval for a few days. I went back to Ch. 17 and reordered some chapters so they stay closer to chronological order as well.

This is one of the best werewolf stories that I have read on this site. Take whatever time you need to heal after your surgery so you can come back and entertain your fans!! Until you return...

Thank you for updating and take care of your self. This is an excellent story. :)

WOW! Richard is going to lose more then his family. Some other pack members are going to leave and join Marcus once they find out what Marcus did and Richard's views.

Now, I do NOT like grumpy ol' Alpha Richard

Sounds like someone has a dirty liver and needs some cod liver oil.

Somebody is about to get Bitch Slapped... Alpha Bitch Slapped... :)

old fool

Someone needs to get it through Richard's thick skull... adapt or die. New world, new rules.