All Comments on 'Dominated'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Very good, loved reading it. Encore, encore. ***** of *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bad writing.

I do not think this writer is worth pursuing. Too many grammatical mistakes.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 6 years ago
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I enjoyed reading this story, I hope there is.anothet chapter.

gentleone58gentleone58over 6 years ago
Like the Story

I like this story but I have a problem trying to figure out from what point of view it is or if it is more than one person's point of view. I do like the story but found it a bit distracting to read.

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While my stories are, for the most part, fictional, they are inspired by real events, people and places. I am not a "professional" writer, so please forgive my mistakes. I am relearning the craft after many years of not writing. I welcome any comments and constuctive critic...