by thesexxilexxi
Soooo first off, this was not bad smut...that being said you made some major mistakes insofar as rape is concerned. There is no sexual blackmail in this story, it is rape plain and simple. Due to biology it is also possible for a body to gain pleasure from rape. Just because there is pleasure does not make it consensual. Consent requires that a person of sound mind (not drunk or drugged or threatened) makes a conscious choice to have sex. She was raped and while she ended up enjoying it, it was still rape.
Pay no attention to the trolls. This was good, and I hope you continue it. I want to see what happens next!