All Comments on 'Dominated by the Alpha'

I enjoyed the story and your style. Hope you continue this one with another chapter!

I like your short story but the sexy parts aren't as graphic or as viscerally detail to get the blood pumping, which is ashamed since I particular like m/m erotica with supernatural elements. Not to mention the name of your MC kept changing from Erik to Eric and vice versa, it is like you can't decide and unfortunately it takes away from the story when you read every single word. My advice is be consistent and more detail descriptions with the sex and if there is action or violence describe in details as well. Otherwise, I can definitely see you can expand on this story and I hope you continue to write because you have a knack for it.