by oneguy4fun
Keep it up please. This is an amazing story line and I want to see where you take it.
And original...! Thanks and please keep on this trend! :-D
Good strong writing. Well developed characters and quite erotic.
Look forward to the next chapters.
I look forward to more from you, the writing is erotic and exciting to us cyber wannabe's.
If only this could be real for us at times.
I HAVENT BEEN ABLE TO READ ALL OF YOUR EXCITING STORY IT HAS BEEN KEEPING ME SEXELY EXCITED SINCE STARTING TO READ IT HOPE TO GET IT DONE SOON MISTRESS IS GETTING VERY EXCITED WITH ALL THE NEW IDEAS KEEP IT UP.
Awesome story. Love it. had the first story happen to be me in real life.
This is by far one of the best stories I gave ever read. I wish this could have happened to me. Thank you so much for this amazing story
The pacing is impeccable. The writing is excellent. And it's arousing even tho this isn't my scene (I'm a chastity guy).
I hope it doesn't turn ugly later on. There's a difference between dominating as a friend and using as a mark. They can take his money without crossing that line.