All Comments on 'Dominion Ch. 01'

It doesn't seem confusing so far. At least I think I'm getting it. As to the category, it seems ok too. Maybe Sci-fi, or Non human might be better. Can't wait for more! If you decide to change the category, please post the next chapter here and let us know which category your putting it in. Thanks!

This story to me looks to have real potential you might want an editor to help prevent minor spelling issues such as the difference between thrown (having been tossed) and throne (a kings chair) keep up the good writing and post a second chapter soon.

Got me engaged. Looking forward to see where it goes. Sounds like sci/fi to me too. Characters come across as human hybrids

But please, PLEASE stop using 'drug' as the past tense of drag. It is not. The past tense of drag is dragged. 'Drug' is a substance introduced to alleviate a condition OR it is a verb meaning administer a substance in order to affect consciousness.

Your story is a strong, well driven, and engaging arc that has continued to improve! It is very refreshing to read a story with consistent well thought out characters. My only criticism is there is not enough of it available yet! Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to the rest of your stories.

Just read the first chapter and it's excellent!

I see from the story dates you just got back into it

Hope everything is blessed in your life and thank you

For writing this:)

Ed

Sorry I've been so late to reply. I was so happy with the replies that I didn't know what to say really. your feedback gives me the motivation to keep writing, and I promise there will be more erotic scenes to come though they have been so scarce. It would be unfair to my characters to try to rush things, and so they will appear when the time is right

I'm also sorry I was on such a long hiatus. I had a lot going on and I can't promise it wont happen again. However, I am determined to finish this story, even if it takes a long time. Thank you all again for sticking with me and giving me the confidence I need not to give up on this monster of a story haha. sometimes it feels bigger than me and I struggle with motivation to keep going.

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