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"Compassionate," Trysten chuckled, brushing back Aryn's hair as he considered Joel's words. "That is not a term I often hear used to describe me."
"Tis' true, though," his eyes bored into Trysten with an apt scrutiny, "I can see it. You hide it well, but its there. No ones given two shits about that girl since she's been in here, but you defended her without a second thought."
"I defend the weak and innocent," he explained as he drew a knuckle over Aryn's cheek. She scrunched up her nose and burrowed deeper into Trysten's shirt, causing him to smile. "What ever she is in here for, I highly doubt she deserved what that man was doing to her."
They were interrupted by the bustling of guards near the entrance of the dungeon, and soon three men moved to stand before Trysten's cell.
"Trysten Gallindo, it's time."
He nodded solemnly and shifted his weight as he attempted to wake the girl he was holding in his lap. She was out cold and he hated to leave her alone that way. The guards seemed impatient and he was running out of time, so he attempted to wake her once more before Joel stood and walked over to his side of the cell.
"I'll take care of her," he lifted the slumbering woman into his arms and turned around. "Just don't ferget what I told ye',"
"I won't," and he meant it. Joel was right. He couldn't give up. He had to find away to fix this mess, and he wanted to repay the man for his wise words. In order to do that he would have to find his way back here some how. "I won't forget you."
Joel smiled at him as he slid down onto the floor with the girl and watched as the guards led the prince from the dungeon. He wasn't sure how successful the lad might be, but he was the only chance the Dominion had at change. He wanted to believe Trysten had the fortitude to break the cycle and fix the corruption so evident in the Dominion's government system. Someone must have been severely threatened by Trysten's presence, because it had been a long time since a person of royalty was banished from the capital. To Joel, that only proved his point even more. Trysten was a force to be reckoned with. Joel could only hope Trysten would find his footing before it was too late.
- COMMENTS
HipsterZombieover 6 years agoAuthordue to some issues I've been having with my work being tampered with as i post it... I am moving my activity to other websites. I am disappointed with how things are conducted here, and at some point I will be taking down my work here as well but I'm too frustrated to deal with it at this moment.
I'm sad to go as this website has high traffic, more so than many other sites I will be posting on... but its not worth the hassle. You can find me on social media if you wish to follow my work further, as I will be sharing my updates there, and you can follow the links to the other websites I'll be working on. instead of clicking on each link separately, you can choose to go to my Linkree, which has a list of all the places i will be.
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HipsterZombieabout 7 years agoAuthorSorry I've been so late to reply. I was so happy with the replies that I didn't know what to say really. your feedback gives me the motivation to keep writing, and I promise there will be more erotic scenes to come though they have been so scarce. It would be unfair to my characters to try to rush things, and so they will appear when the time is right
I'm also sorry I was on such a long hiatus. I had a lot going on and I can't promise it wont happen again. However, I am determined to finish this story, even if it takes a long time. Thank you all again for sticking with me and giving me the confidence I need not to give up on this monster of a story haha. sometimes it feels bigger than me and I struggle with motivation to keep going.
Admiralbird348about 7 years agoJust read the first chapter and it's excellent!
I see from the story dates you just got back into it
Hope everything is blessed in your life and thank you
For writing this:)
Ed
Danderpopabout 7 years agoYour story is a strong, well driven, and engaging arc that has continued to improve! It is very refreshing to read a story with consistent well thought out characters. My only criticism is there is not enough of it available yet! Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to the rest of your stories.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoBut please, PLEASE stop using 'drug' as the past tense of drag. It is not. The past tense of drag is dragged. 'Drug' is a substance introduced to alleviate a condition OR it is a verb meaning administer a substance in order to affect consciousness.
