All Comments on 'Donal' Ch. 03'

This chapter is just as enchanting as the last. Well told story with plenty of intrigue and suspense. Well Done.

I'm still here, so I'm still hooked. I was surprised she came to life so soon... I guess I was thinking she'd be a ghost a bit longer, but when I saw the story hit two pages I was glad to see more. :)

Very nice and a great tale. I look forward to the mystery of

Donal' and his lady.

~ Red ~

I dont read to many Stories on here which are that long

but very interesting

discovered this excellent saga,will there be any further episodes?

It is an interesting piece. The storyline could take off into a full historical novel at this point. A novel with a couple of special quirks! Love it, please continue.

Excellent, well researched. I hope to see more of your works