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"I'm sorry I'm late getting home, Daniel" she apologized "You wouldn't believe the morning I've had"
Daniel smiled and said, "That's fine, I only just got in myself. I ran into a lady at the Casey's who was having some trouble, my mates and I helped her out. Happy Anniversary, by the way" and handed her a small gift.
Donna's heart fluttered. She knew what the box contained, and what its contents signified. Training was over. Daniel was asking for complete ownership of her. He had it from the very beginning, but now it was official. She would wear her permanent collar proudly.
"Happy Anniversary, Master" she replied, and led her cruel, loving man back to the bedroom, to satisfy any lust that remained in him after their busy morning.
- COMMENTS
robertreamsover 9 years agoLove the O Henry ending, but something telegraphed it a moment too soon. In the early part of the story, I found myself stumbling over some clumsy usage, but the action parts flowed well. More close and intense description of the men and their body parts would have enhanced the story, made the rape scene more intense. To intensify the surprise ending, the rape should be more horrid. Also I don't think you took the ball out of her mouth before you had her scream. Keep at it you definitely have talent
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI LOVE the fact that she's a BBW. Not many authors dare to do that. And the faux rape was a great surprise.
