All Comments on 'Don't Be Afraid'

As my title says, I don't normally read this kind of story...but quite honestly, your writer's name also drew me in. Rather cute I think. But now to your story. It moved on well enough and thank God was written like you know the English language well enough to speak and write. I don't think you have well developed characters, but using this as a backstory so to speak, you could remedy that if you wish this a series...and I'd love to see it as one.

The healling is wo;nderful, however!!!!, I'd like to hear of a pair of balls being deposited in a jar of alcohol.

It doesn't make any difference if the story was written from fact or fiction, it read is if it were real. This is a very loving and warm well written story. I would like to read more about the girls.Thanks for the good post...Rich

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