All Comments on 'Don't Break the Spell'

Very well done. You managed to keep a pearl of curiousity until he very end.

From the first paragraph on you capture and entice the reader, luring them into the erotic spell that you cast. Mixing romanticism with eroticism with amazing finesse, this is a definate masterpiece. Well Done & Keep Writing!!

as if I was in the bed with you....a silent partner in crime....wonderful...thanks for the invite.I'll join you anytime.

hear it, feel it , and smell it

a very nice work, full of great description and paced just right.

nice job

That was excellent, very hot and descriptive. Even though I don't usually like stories written in the present tense, this was an exception. I found myself envious of the man next to you for having such a sensuous SO.

One small quibble, though. In the next to last paragraph, you misspelled the word "steel". You probably used a spellcheck program that didn't catch the homonym there.

Way past good, a voyeur's delight.

hovering over you, listening to your quiet moments, listening to your thoughts. You drag me into your fantasy. When you touch him, it is like you are touching me and when you touch yourself it is like you are somehow touching me again.

An excellent story that could easily stand at the top of several categories. I thank you for the time and effort it took to write this story. I eagerly look forward to reading another from you.

Don't break the spell...write another one quick...<snicker> Your tantalizing tale of an erotic tail was wonderful, thansk for the invited read and look forward to reading more by you...witty spell caster~

Wow~~!!! This is a real Hottie!..Imagery..Flow..Whole story is smooth, hot, and sizzling..Keep the coming~~!!

Well paced with clever metaphors. Very erotic!

good story enjoyed reqading it

This was so romantic and beautiful. It was sweet and sexy at the same time. You have a great style of writing.

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