All Comments on 'Don't Get Mad, Get Even'

Steve's cup runneth over... (without viagra or cialis?) He also loves all his harem...(polyamory...)

Dislocated the ol’ girl’s hip?!? 🤣

The only two people I thought had any redeemable qualities at all were Rick, Sarak and her sister.

The MC was a DB but it was enjoyable to read.

Maybe the most messed up story I’ve ever read.

So... the nice thing about fiction is that the story can go any which way no matter how unrealistic. I feel that for the effort 5 stars.

Seriously?! What a douche of an mc. He should have been the one to die or better yet life worse than death. The mc has the mentality of a young teen. I get that he refused to talk to his wife for some days because he was hurting, then he did the same by banging the neighbor for month's fell in love with her got her pregnant and still refuses to talk to his wife (who was the guilty party) and trying her best to work things out. He whines and act like the victim which at first he was but not anymore. Fucks her wife's mom and acts all guilty, nearly killed his neighbor. This is one of those stories that leaves a sour taste in our mouths. The wife should have kicked him to the curb. As the author say's she is beautiful and can get a wonderful man and move on. She learned her lesson she will never stray again knowing the consequences. Should have left the douche mc miserable. Not condoning what she did. Both are guilty,but the douche mc in the beginning was portrayed as a very good man which he was not, he break every morals there is in a marriage.

This guy had some pretty serious luck - he gets cheated on and then in return for just swallowing a bit of his pride, he gets kinky sex just thrown at him. The way I look at it, him and Sarah did love each other and he just needed to find a way back to her - it just happened to be through their next-door neighbors pussy and her mother's asshole. I mean, imagine if Sarah did cheat on him again, he could say, "I can't believe you did it again after it took 4 months of banging your mothers asshole to get me to forgive you!" God, just imagining the look on her face is gold. Steve was obviously the big winner in this story, personally I think he got MORE than even.

I'm thinking that I would just put the whole group in a plane and, crash it into a mountain. All these fuckers are twisted AF. If, you are not going to forgive, just leave. All the extra bullshit, is just that evil bullshit.

Yeah the commenter form 10 months ago with post starting with "Plot meandered all over the place...", has a long but comprehensive analysis of why this was one of the author's poorer efforts. This is rated way too high. And the MC comes off as an asshole. Not to mention it makes zero sense why Sarah cheats with Rick again after first time. The MIL antics were detestable and thr MC falling in love with Georgia made zero sense. What a trainwreck.

Uggh. One of the author's worst for a lot of reasons. The MIL stuff pushed this way down imho.

I'm having a real problem with this story I can't decide if I score it at a 1 or a 5. It's really well written and had me engaged with the characters which normally means a 5 but the MC was such a hypocritical asshole for carrying on with Georgia and his MIL it wasn't getting even he was just fucking who he wanted when he wanted. As for a medic nearly maiming Rick which may have resulted in the woman he professed to love being left in a position of struggling to support 3 children and a crippled husband. Really??? The MC gets away with all his cheating and lying and gets forgiven in the end from the woman who cheated on him and then was put through hell. If you meant to portray the MC as such a hypocrite then it's an excellent piece of writing. If you didn't then it's not a good story. So I can't decide what to score. BardnotBard

Lots of ups downs meandering turns but all to make this story riveting. Thank you for a very entertaining tale. 5+

I was devastated when Rick and Georgia died. Goddamn man that was saddening. I'm glad he took Sarah back, he got massive revenge on her. Had a baby with another woman, even fucked her mom. Plus, she had a round phat ass, you have to hang on to girls like that

Knew this one was going to stir up a shit storm of chuck haters when Steve let Sarah back into his life. People just need to relax and enjoy the story for the funny fiction it is. Sad that Rick and Georgia got killed off at the end, but it would have had to end at some time and they did go out stating their love for each other. The fishing string/hood thing was kind of iffy, but it got the results needed for the story to continue. Over all, I enjoyed reading the story, some parts more than others, like the kinky MIL, but still think it was well done.

Anonymous comment from 5 months ago that starts with "Plot meandered all over the place" listed pretty much all the plot holes and peculiar, nonsensical actions taken by the characters. The stuff with him falling in love with Georgia and her magic vagina, which apparently her husband Rick never got the memo on during all their years of marriage, cheating together for years, was bad enough, but the stuff with the MIL was just rancid. Uggh. MC is an asshole in a story with a lot of assholes.

The cunt Georgia should keep her cheating husband in line instead of giving Steve advice about reconciling with his skank wife!! Guess cheating whoring wives stick together!!!

this took some strange turns

I’m going to give you five stars for the story but I think there is one aspect that was awful. All the talk about your silly mustang and you never described the pulse pounding, ear shattering, pavement tearing power of the 1970 Chevelle SS 454. Shame on you, you damn Ford loving SOB! Haha!

Well you certainly Had just about everything in this one, quite long, quite a complicated saga , but a good read for a sex story, I liked your characters and descriptions

Yeah…Stang was a good writer back in the day…

Plot meandered all over the place. Fucking is mother in law, her turning crazy with luat and kinky sex, blackmailing him, etc at her age was ludicrous. Lot of other plot holes. Their plan to trick Rick with a pregnancy was shallow and relatively simple to unveil. Didn't take Rick long to figure it out. Pretty dumb. Second, Georgia supposedly has these magic pelvic contractions and vaginal muscle control but apparently Rick didn't get the memo. To him she is too loose and he becomes infatuated with Sarah's tighter pussy. Except when the MC fucks Sarah later on, he internally monologs about how she doesn't have the magic pussy contractions and her vagina while tighte is boring. Worse, Sarah learns about the pelvic floor contraction exercises from Georgia and suddenly it is amazing when she fucks the MC, and he loses control rapidly. Huh? So yeah apparently Rick never got the memo or Georgia never did the contractions for him, which we know is not true at one point when she is discussing the hot week of sex with Rick before discovering his betrayal. Third, on the phone Sarah extolls Rick's big dick as the biggest she has ever had (well she only ahd three apparently ever). But when Georgia first sees the MC's dick she nearly loses her mind and can't believe how stupid Sarah was. Umm so in Georgia's mind we get affirmation that MC is perhaps similar or slightly smaller in size than Rick, but based on Georgia's reactions when they have sex, may actually be thicker. Sonwas Sarag just stroking Rick's male ego? Maybe, but that is not the way to get him to leave off the affair. He seemed obsessed with fucking Sarah but Georgia sounds like a sex goddess. Huh? Fourth, Sarah had sex, no oral and no anal, no kissing, with Rick four times, lasting 10 minutes each (confirmed by Georgia) and was the worst sex her life, and was wracked with guilt and sadness afterwards. Ok... but then why after the first time did she go back to Rick? Well he is the biggest dick she ever had, right? Except he isn't much larger, if at all, than the MC. She doesn't orgasm with Rick or at nest weakly so. And he lasts 10 minutes with no oral, no foreplay and no kissing. Huh? She tried toys and they did nothing for her (her words). But surely the toys would do better than Rick. Was it about being desired? But Rick is 50+, balding, with a beer gut. Real seduction prize their. She seduced Rick, then he got hooked and worshipped and badgered her, despite Georgia having (for some time at least) clearly the superior pussy. So why go back to Rick? Wouldn't she go elsewhere? The sex was shitty (her own words). Ok maybe she feels scared to go elsewhere. Umm sure. But sounds like toys and vibraror would work better. At least then she would not be defiling her marriage vows. There are multiple other things that make no sense. Too many to list but they are lesser. Don't get why MC is so betrayed (every right to be of course) doesn't just divorce Sarah. How does he ever become a friend again with Rick? Huh? Georgia convinced him to fake it originally but he fully forgave Rick later and they were buddies again, maybe not best friends like before. Georgia is 15 years older than the MC. I get the initial revenge fuck(s). But after first time with her magic pussy contractions, he is fully in love? Whuh? I am.not going to get into who got more "even". Yeah he impregnates Georgia and she has his biological daughter. That is certainly a big deal. Hurts Rick too, who actually learns the truth 'soonish' (because Georgia and the MC are stupid). Deb figures everything out in like 5 minutes. But yeah he fucks Georgia in every conceivable way like hundreds of times, continuing twice a week for a couple years. But the most midmnd boggling thing is the mother-in-law. That made no sense. The MC cucking his father in law is shallow and mean spirited, a real dick move (pun intended?). What did the FIL do to him? He can't keep in his pants anymore, well exactly for Sarah's younger sister who pursues the MC hard. The MIL seemed cool at first, but then became this raging 60+ year old sex freak who adores anal sex. Whuh? Seems likely that Stangstar06 was writing this story to punk the reading audience. Would say it worked well in that purpose.

I knew this story was gonna upset a lot of commentators before I even looked at their words. Suspect StangStar06 poltted the storyline with malice aforethought. He has done a wonderful job. Five amazing stars.

5 Stars on this one . Georgia sets the standard for loving and caring . I did take my ex back once but not twice as I had to hold my head up some . ..

Three cheating wives, three cheating husbands, three men made into cucks. Two husbands turned into wimps. Not much of a story. Great writing wasted on poor story and useless characters.

11 chapters of written diarrhea go have the cucky go back to the skanking whore Sarah!!

CUCK WRITER AND THE WEAK WIMPY MCs

Still a crazy kinda story, but enjoyable and the husband does get more than even with the cheaters.

5 stars. Crazy story. Had to laugh a lot. It is fiction folks. The words came out of a warped mind (I say that with all due respect to the author). Just keep writing.

Uggh. This "getting even" crap by fucking Georgia a gazillion times and doing her mother for what month? Or years? Is just dumb. And oh yeah getting Georgia pregnant? Divorce her and move on. Or get over it. But falling in love with Georgia? Why because she has great pelvic action? That somehow Rick never knew about or cared for? How does that make sense? Then Sarah's mom doing all sorts of kinky stuff and complaining she isn't "even" with her husband? Dumb. And thr lamest thing is Sarah's reason for cheating. She gets 4x10 minutes of fucking with quick shot Rick, and yet she didn't ask her husband because she didn't want to pressure him, while he worked and finished school? And this was only a couple of months before he graduated? A total of 4 times? For quick ruts? What she can't ask her husband for four 10 min quickies? Wth? And she wrongs her hands before, feels guilty after, and goes back after a couple of weeks till graduation? Wtf? And with her balding, okder neighbor? 40 mins of shitty sex? That is got to be one of the dumbest risk vs reward decisions ever. And how did this turn into 11 pages?

As often with this author this far too long for what it is.Also,how did he ree in the fishing line when it is still attached to the bonnet stay.?How did Deb know about him shagging her sister in law?.

Sometimes reading something just makes you dumber this was just like Dumb and Dumber. Again the authors prediliction for Grey public hairs raises its ugly head. I mean come on a 30 year old guy banging the shit out of a 50+ year old woman 😂

And then of course the great capitulation at the end because the husband loves her so much. Fuck me the way this author describes love its like some mutant affliction or something😳 Oh and not for nothing but you blow your mortgage your 401k and your savings to be an X-ray Technician.....really 🙄

There's such a thing as a lack of vision or ambition or just fucking common sense

I read to understand relationships and it amazes me how complicated they become. Erotica is not as much a turn as the reasons why people do the things they do beyond contract law.

The 21st century is not the age of Reason. That's why our world is rife with fulfilling base urges.

Author write obsessively about infidelity and pony muscle cars. His variety about the first and consequences are amazing creatively or plagiarism.

Kudos.

5 stars. Incredible read. What a ride.

Great read. I think It's a bit tongue in cheek which makes it more entertaining.

"Honey, I'm going up to see how Sarah's surgery is going," said Sarah, squeezing my shoulder as she left. That sentence was taken from the story...

Really? Isn't that a bit wrong as far as writing goes?

After 3 pages I knew that Steve would be taking his cheating wife back. Turned to Page 11 and quickly scrolled to see if the name Sarah appeared. It did, often. So, I read a couple of paragraphs and knew not to bother reading the story. The cheating wife basically mocking the devastated husband because he won't just "get over it" and then he takes her back -- I didn't read pages 4 thru 10...didn't need to. I won't be recommending this story to friends.

Incredible story... "5"

EastCoaster

Epic read!! Thanks for sharing

No one to like in this story. Sarah cheats with Rick because Steve is working too many hours and she’s not getting enough sex. Steve then cheats with Georgia who is almost old enough to be his mother, gets Georgia pregnant, and he criminally injures Rick (to get even with him) by rigging the Chevelle car hood as a booby trap. Rick could have been killed or could have lost one or both hands, and that type of disability then hurts Georgia and her children as well. And then Steve cheats with his mother-in-law. Really crazy. It’s clear Steve will fuck any pussy that’s part of a woman with super big tits, a large ass, or both. So Steve was a good guy until Sarah’s cheating turned him bad. Two stars for this awful and depressing plot.

Fun humorous story until the end and then that was a sad but satisfying ending.

He was right to fuck to neighbor and even the MIL, but he should have pounded the sister and the nurse and then divorced her skanky, cheating ass.

Wifey was delusional. Why was it ok for her but she went nuclear when the nurse went on the male to hubby. That right there would have sealed the deal with the nurse. Wifey excuse was so weak and pitiful. Used to think this author was ok, but lately , too much cuck, too much raac and stories getting weaker. Low score here as this was not good.

"I guess you didn't really love me as much as you claimed, you liar," she cried. "All I did was give someone some pussy and all of a sudden, I'm not yours anymore. It's not the end of the world you know. It's not like it's the last pussy I'm ever going to give. It's not like I'm going to run out. If you're so concerned with my pussy why aren't you in it right now?"

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Now that right there is Martian Slut Ray Hall of Fame material!

Not one of your better ones. The neighbor o the MIL why? Also when Sarah exploded at the hospital on the "cute" nurse I suspect her reaction to georgia would have been more balistic. Finally it seems that you insert the car babble in some awkward senarios.

Well written, but it is a tale about stupid people doing even stupider things. Who on God's green earth would shag his mother in-law??? The very thought makes me cringe.....

I like this author (and really, any author who writes good prose) but this story was interesting to me because I thought to detect the influence of another author. The author in question is Just Plain Bob. It wasn't the plot or characters or suchlike; It was the "flavor" of the story. But maybe that's just plain me.

Ignore the loser Anons; it's a good story.5*****

Probably one of your least entertaining stories. God do I hate reading about a breakfast menu!! How in hell do yuo justify that? BORING!

Good story. Pretty crazy and outlandish, but well done.

LOSER WIMP CUCK HUSBAND TAKESNACK THE LYING CHEATING SLUT WIFE....LIKE MOTHER LIKE DAUGHTER

Saint husband character with 'little dick, fast car syndrome'.

Wife with huge fat ass that 'Loves husband soooooo much' that cheats on him repeatedly for, apparently, no reason at all.

Husband finds out and cries for a while. Goes out and gets an erection from speeding in his car. All his friends and family ask him to forgive slut. Finds perfect new wife. Old wife becomes psychotic shrew and ends up alone. The end.

Downer ending, the author should change it so only Rick died, that way he could keep both the women he loved, rather than be left with the consolation prize.

Good read. Sad about Georgia and Rick dieing. Thought the boys would move in with their sister also. Thanks

steve is a cuck who took the whore back .

pathetic

1*

If Sarah was that horny for sex he chased Rick,what did she do for sex in the months she and Steve were apart.?

I usually like your stories. This one, not so much. I question why he would fall in love with a woman with such low self esteem, who would put up with a serial cheater. Then when the mother in law offered herself, I stopped reading.

He's nothing but a wimpy cuckold for letting the cheating whore back. That's all this story is. 1 star.

This story is flawed in several ways. Carla is irrelevant to the plot and character development. As a result I am forced to ask why are her parts present? She is meaningless. This story is ultimately a combination of star crossed lovers and a marital reconciliation. The ultimate problem with the story is far too little time was dedicated to developing the reconciliation between Steve and Sarah. As a result the following action feels like an after thought and everything after the accident is unconvincing.

I am not opposed to Georgia dying but the revelations that the side characters knew more than the reader was to believe was unrealistic. Sarah's relationship with Steve is basically a given without any time or effort by the author.

I appreciate the effort made by SS06 but dispassionately, this story needs a lot of work. I question the editing to be honest. When this makes it through, I have to state that the editor should be editing nothing.

Honey, I'm going up to see how Sarah's surgery is going," said Sarah, squeezing my shoulder as she left.

page 9, Georgia and Steve essentially agree to waste the next 15 years with spouses from which they've moved on, giving up the chance to raise their own daughter. Other than Georgia's sons, of which she'd get custody, why not break away right then? Steve's such a hard-liner against cheating that it's hypocritical that he sign up to cheat for 15+ years.

Rick might be the best developed character. In really life, it would be hard to separate the siblings.

MAN, WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND MUSTANGS? OH YEA, NICE STORY DUDE!

Steve is cruel, vindictive and has no capacity for shame or guilt. Any man would understandably be angry and resentful if he found his wife and his best friend were having sex behind his back. It would not justify, though, arranging for the friend to be injured in a way that could destroy both of his hands and possibly result in fatal head trauma. Steve doesn't have remorse for dropping the car hood on Rick even as Rick is being taken for a brain scan. That's cold.

Sarah and Rick's affair also does not not justify Steve's long term sexual involvement with Georgia or Sarah's mother. Having an affair with your MIL is so wrong that its just plain evil. What kind of man would turn his FIL into a cuck? Steve and Georgia are both hard to like as they smugly watch Rick and Sarah interact with Stevie. Good people do not take delight in continually disrespecting their spouses while professing to love them no matter what the spouses have done.

Steve isn't getting revenge. He's just being himself. He is, and almost certainly always has been, a psychopath.

Technically justifiable? That’s just stupid.

It does occur to me to wonder what she’s going to do when he’s too old to get it up.

"Yes Rick you have the biggest dick I've ever had, but you already know that. Did Steve ever get an answer to her statement???

But it was still a CUCK story!!! Steve should have gone ahead and divorced the slut. He never did ask her about the comment she made about how much BIGGER Ricks dick was!!! She said Ricks dick was the biggest she had EVER had... That would have sealed her fate!!!

So many gratuitous complaints, so little to complain about.

I'm sad about Georgia dying, I have to say the ending didn't leave me entirely happy. But I'm satisfied.

A ball-less writer wrote a dickless wonder story

Nothing to see here. Take a bunch of otherwise likable characters and make cheating a light fun revenge thing. Makes everybody cheaper. Even as a tongue in cheek parody it's weak. Would have bought a revengeless reconciliation easier than having him come back to her after sleeping with her neighbor , and her mother . Both were cheated on , and felt the title of this story justified. At least he refused his sister in law.

Would have much preferred he stayed with Gloria , but if course she died , so plans had to change. Still , wish he had moved on. But this piece of fiction obviously wanted to !she a fun parody of cheating and revenge. I guess I just am too sensitive on that subject to swallow that.

That you have ever written hopefully your wife suck some guy's dick in front of you you Cucky.

Having Sarah cheat on her husband Steve was technically justifiable,and for Georgia and Steve to get payback was somewhat justified as well,but for G&S it was just cruel and heartless to fall in love with each other.Sure Sarah and Rick cheated on their Spouses but not out of spite or malice.

Eventually after months or years Steve finally gave Sarah another chance and I guess forgave her,now I hate that both Georgia and Rick died but that was the catalyst to get Steve to forgive Sarah,so they could raise Steve's Daughter as their own.I also think the old saying "two wrongs don't make a right" is wholly accurate but it made both Steve and Sarah realize what is truly important and learned to be honest with each other and not hide their feelings so they can work on their problems.

The 1967 and 1968 Mustang so called fastbacks aren't. They are actually Mustang 2+2. I had a 1967 Mustang 2+2 and first sex in it because the back seat folds down flat.

-1 star for the cuck forgiving the whore and taking her back

-1 star for turning down the sister

-1 star for turning down the nurse

-1 star for being willing to let his child be raised by fucking cheaters

Sad.

When I caught My Ex Cheating on Me .. I Did her half Sister and best Friend .. Sadly Neither One got Pregnant by Me .. But The Wife I have Now I trust completely .. I Really got Lucky with Her .. And NO I Will Not Trade or Swap Her For anything or anyone ...

I know these kind of stories are not for everyone but this was pretty fucking good five stars

I read to page 8 then skipped to the end of page 11.. too much filler

While I thought the story was interesting and the writing was good, for me it was just way too long and convoluted. Especially considering he ended up keeping the cheating bitch he was married to. It was like, “All that”, for THAT?!!

The story went from standard cheating story to over the top revenge to Jerry Springer hilarious to tear jerker. And within the tear jerker you still injected humor when you destroyed a GM product and saved the Mustang. I'm thinking you won a bet with someone that you could do all that inside one story.

Enjoyed the hell out of it.

Don't see this guy getting anything, never mind even. He is controlled by both women, both his wife and Georgia had him twisted around their fingers. Don't have much faith his daughter will have any morals with her parents. It was a bizarre story, didn't see the ending, but giving it 4/5 stars. Well written, interesting story, just didn't feel the moral of the story.

Than how Georgia did him....I agree that he was a piece of shit in some respects, but he honestly loved his wife. Sarah, same deal.....divorcing would be better than the kind of prolonged pain. I'm all for revenge affairs, but you turned Rick into little better than an ATM for Georgia and it's unlikely that he would have stuck around for it. Sarah, maybe, just because she at least got laid now and then. My issue was the complete cutting off of Rick if Georgia was going to stay with him. Even Steve didn't do that part to Sarah. If Georgia was honestly done with him (and no, I don't believe her that she still loved him after all that), she could have just moved in with Steve and Sarah and set Rick free to find someone new. That's how I would have handled it, made it a polygamous deal with Steve, Georgia, and Sarah together. Maybe mother-in-law, and perhaps even Deb. Perhaps. If Rick's not getting laid, at least he doesn't have to be strung along.

Pay back is a bitch. I would have told Rick that I intentionally dropped the hood on his hand just the make sure he got the message.

But truly loved the story.

are totally disgusting. Nothing and nobody to root for. Just like a trailer park trash in Alabama. The BS about some ancient crappy cars just adds to the whole atmosphere. Any time you start writing about "Mustang, ... Chevelle" and what not it just makes you, as a writer, a clear portrait of a redneck.

If this is what you wanted good for you but I am going to give you 1 star for this trailer park trash story that I wasted time reading and skimming.

are totally disgusting. Nothing and nobody to root for. Just like a trailer park trash in Alabama. The BS about some ancient crappy cars just adds to the whole atmosphere. Any time you start writing about "Mustang, ... Chevelle" and what not it just makes you, as a writer, a clear portrait of a redneck.

If this is what you wanted good for you but I am going to give you 1 star for this trailer park trash story that I wasted time reading and skimming.

and made her living in the house and having sex with me permanatly as part of the reconcilliation

Sarah started this wild ride by cheating with Rick. Steve kicked her to the curb, and got a little revenge with Georgia, and MIL. Make that a lot of revenge, often. Everything falls into place for the reconciliation with Sarah. Stevie 's birth adds a little complication, taken care of by killing off Rick and Georgia. Everyone happily accepts Stevie's parentage, and everyone loves happily ever after. Quite a ride, completely different from where I thought it was heading early on. Enjoyed it.

Steve was a dick. He should have taken the high road but didn't. In the end he was worse than she was. He got even and then some. Surprised he didn't do the little sister. With all his character flaws he should have.

Chevelles dont have prop rods for the hood.

Thanks a lot it was a very engaging story. Great characters well developed.

Perhaps I’m being anal, but in the interest of accuracy: Tw0cr0ws got it partly right when he said that Chevrolet hoods (of the vintage of the car in the story) were supported by spring-loaded hinges, but he implied that Ford never used such a system, which is not correct. For many years (including 1970), Ford hoods were supported by spring-loaded hinges just like Chevrolet. Saxon Hart also got it partly right, when he said that no Chevelle ever used a prop rod, but in the same sentence, he said that no Chevelle ever had an interior hood release. That last part is not correct. While it is true that the 1970 Chevelle in the story would not have had an interior hood release, 73-77 Chevelles did. Of course, such details only matter to car guys...

I guess I'm alone here but the story sucked! TOO long and just too idiotic!

Absolutely one of your best!

Buddy I’m pissed how the he’ll could you write be a car guy and write off a SS Chevelle lol really enjoyed the story.

I enjoyed your story. Beautiful ending.

Not the usual fare from this author but very well crafted. Found it hilarious in parts and touching in others. Certainly *****'s.

Why the fuck did Sarah get away with it? Seeiously. She didn’t learn a fucking thing. She had no idea of the magnitude of her actuons. It wasn’t just ‘a little pussy’ that the cunt was giving away. He’s a fucking cuck for taking her back and deserves all the pain and more

3rd read and enjoyed it

But this one was tough to finish. It seems that there was an ounce of morals between the whole group of people.

C'mon... I love you but I did the worst possible thing to you. And oh yeah it didn't mean a thing. Seriously? What a bunch of selfish degenerate characters.

I hate Nazis (Blues Brothers) Hey I liked the story so as far as I am concerned that's what counts! Nit picking hecklers A Film critic they do not make (bit of star wars)

Your story is Fantastic! Thanks for sharing it! ★★★★★ WOOF

really strange and ridiculous.

"Love makes you accept a person and all of their flaws and forgive them when they slip!" What an idiotic opinion!!! Love makes you never cheat on them you love!! Love makes you never betray who you love! Love makes you never hurt who you love!! So whats your idiotic statement! Your crap is only a too long cuckold/wimp story - no

more no less!!

cuck-boy gets to fuck a couple of geriatric slobs ....wheeeeee

should have divorced the whore .

maybe her next fling will get them both some nice STDs to share

at least i hope so . 1*