by loerics
Very well written, hopefully you will think of writing a second instalment to this story.
Very well written. Not overly erotic, but enjoyable. Keep them cuming, and tell Mark to wear a condom
I think you captured Ashson's lighthearted style quite nicely even though you didn't keep it to a single page. From my point of view that's good since his stories are way too short for my taste. I always want to know what comes next so I'd love to read about Amy's date with Matt.
Ashton would be proud! I really enjoyed read your story and I hope that unlike Ashton you won't leave us waiting for another chapter, one of my main complaints about his stories are they are too short and leaves you wanting more.
and I drive the main roads ... and some of the back roads looking for ladies about to die from hypothermia! Sounds like his first aid techniques were right on!
Expected to be disappointed. Reached a new level here - fell asleep 4 times while reading!