All Comments on 'Don't Upset the Halloween Witch'

Good story and good concept. Be careful of point of view. It wasn't always easy to tell who was talking as you switched from one pov to the other.

A bit hard to keep track of who "he" and "she" were meant to be

The ending was not terribly climatic but it did fit the narrative. Overall, the story is very well written. Good pace, made sense, and each stayed in their character. Cons: got a little confusing when the instincts were conversing inwardly with the characters, but that was about it. Otherwise, a pretty good story.

This is a very good story. The content was great and the only downside being, it could be organized in a better way in terms of alternating POVs. I would have loved to see more from the man in the girl's body though. Hope you write more such stories.

This was a sexy and fun story! Thank you for witing it.