All Comments on 'Doris and Lisa Ch. 02'

I wonder why so many bad stories are being written lately. Sigh.

Yeah, it's annoying... Glad there's some good ones like this to balance things out :p

@highclassic: even with the slower pace fitting the 50s, your characters and events make for an enjoyable read, the depth is much better than some cardboard cutouts with a porn pretext of a plot. Looking forward to more.