All Comments on 'Doris and the Chevy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good work

Nice little story - keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Refreshingly original story!

Really liked this - not your average run-of-the-mill story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
That's IT???!

Oh my gosh, the directions you could have gone to with this... But the sex was appropriate for the 18 yr old characters: fast, satisfying the guy only, and over faster than you can say "Pop my cherry!"

Great story idea! Just needed to be more fully expanded IMO.

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