by Irish Moss
Oh to be young again, great story line, as I read more of your offerings they all have that ring of truth to them, good work keep it up and keep going, how about making some more of them into chapters and prolong them??
While I gave this story a 4 out of 5, I still really enjoyed it. I didn't like that the last comment, from years ago, called it rubbish. I suspect it is a better story than Anynomous, or I, could write.