All Comments on 'Dorm Room Fun'

Very nice descriptive story. Left me wanting more. No clue if thre will be a follow-on story or if this is a one-of. I woul vote for more with a chance to develop the characters and introduce new characters and situations.

I loved this story. Nice, to the point, but enough buildup to create tension. PLEASE write more!

Your story just jumped right into it? I see good writing,detail and choice of words. W.S.S.

Everything about this story felt rushed. It was nice and descriptive, but still rushed.

loved it, sounds autobiographical - is it?