All Comments on 'Dorothy Does Oz Ch. 05'

by Maguppy Puppy

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Lich LordLich Lordover 19 years ago
Even though you accidentally submitted twice....

....or not, the story was still killer.

Sean RenaudSean Renaudover 19 years ago
Awesome

I would have given you a five but you double submitted. I only give one freebie after that you have to be awesome. You're way to good to make mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Series

this series just keeps getting better and better...keep up the good work...I can't wait for the next chapter

Amanda KeepAmanda Keepover 19 years ago
Fantastic!

I've seen quite a few "adult" treatments of the Wizard of Oz online, but this is by far the BEST I've ever seen! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
My fantasy ripped off!

Wow! That was my fantasy man! I used to be the scarecrow in a play and I had the hots for Dorothy since then! When I read your story I can't help but picture me and her... Good job... I need more, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Stunning series of work

You have a fine imagination and a way with words.

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