All Comments on 'Double Duty'

I liked the little twist of her love being not so unrequited as she thought and overall the story was well written and flowed along nicely to it's climax

Excellent use of cadence and language to build the erotic scene. Nicely done!

sexy..but it should have been more hotttt....she should of given u a harcore fuck in your pussy and ass and suck out your juicies hard and bite your cunt and have u scream in pain!!!!!