All Comments on 'Double Trouble'

by celticknot28

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visioneervisioneerover 10 years ago

Well done. I suggest breaking the text into smaller paragraphs - makes for easier reading. Do we get the revenge story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yes do we get the REVENGE

Makes me wet just thinking about what I'm going to do to you !!!!!

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