by beachbum1958
It feels like we are watching as the fuse is lit. There is no question of if there will be an explosion just how soon, how big, and what will be left?
The sex is hot as always, but honestly the story is what I’m looking forward to the most. Can’t wait to see what’s coming next. Keep these chapters coming as quickly as you can.
well written, well paced, fascinated by the cajun lingo,,someone knows their lousiana heritage,,the relationship is romantic, the sex is fine but its the story that is holding my interest.
Both of these first two parts have been exceptionally good and I can't wait to read the next part.
i'll admit - i struggle thru the cajun dialect, but this is one great story. well written, suspenseful, and good sex. perfect!
At a sister me and my brother though it was anther great story on how hot a relationship between a brother and sister can get with the love they show for each other thank you keep up the great work