All Comments on 'Down at the Twist and Shout Ch. 03'

Wow I'm reading this and moonbeam is one of my favorite characters in another story i read it over and over again and im completely shocked she and the others are in this story. Just wow. Great story.

The mob, cartels, corrupt cops, hired guns, movie and pop stars, and swamp people?. With as much pressure as these two are under I'm not sure why the 3 on 2 kidnapping was included.

Ch 04 soon?

I notice you seem to follow this author fairly closely, so the answer to your question as to why the scene with the two girls and the three boys who'd detained them is there should be obvious. You should know by now that BB1958 never introduces characters that don't show up in some significant way later in the narrative; from the emphasis he placed at least twice on the two girls' relationship with Johnny it's evident to me they have an important part to play somewhere later down the line, so your observation demonstrates that while you read it, you didn't really grasp how the story elements are working.

For my part, I'll wait until they show up, and see what part they play in fixing the trouble Johnny and Justine are in; if they do turn out to be some kind of irrelevant side-step or page-filler and don't add significantly to the narrative, I will of course be back to apologize to you.

I agree regarding the cousins and their importance in his life. My comment was merely an observation that with the 3 in the nitro and its companion (short range) vehicle. The nasty folks from NYC. The cartels. The Federal, State, and local agencies feeding Intel to the baddies.The evasive travel route, and the level of tension and anticipation in this chapter. The flash back seemed outside of the flow. Not a smooth sequence or building on the mood.

It could also just be me wanting to see what happens next rather than revisiting the past.

Meanwhile I keep wondering if he might have an ally among those with whom he worked in the Sheriff's department. Or. Or. Or.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Sex, violence, skullduggery, romance, pace this has the lot. Don’t keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!

This is one of the best stories I've read you've got to keep going.

Its gonna go bang soon ... just love this story, fantastic y'all

usually a story with multiple chapters drags somewhere in the middle - this just keeps getting betetr and better. love the sex, the relationships and family, the plot, the suspense. Wow. 5 stars. wish i could give more!

The standard question on my device is : what did you think of this story?

My standard answer BRILLIANT.