All Comments on 'Down By the Bay Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
beautifully written

This is a marvelous example of romantic storytelling (in spite of the classification for Chapter 3): sweet, tender, loving, passionate. The only thing wrong with the third chapter is its brevity.

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