All Comments on 'Down on the Farm Ch. 02'

Good writing. Good story and I really love happy endings.

I don't quite understand the denying him because "that's what Tony does" but to each his own!!

Loved the story. Please don't stop here and please don't shave her. I would love to hear about them making love in wonderful places and him enjoying her hairy body.

If this story is over I hope you write more along this line. I love natural women.

Something about this story made me fall right into it. I love building Forts. I like living in the wild and never mind long periods of solitude.The primitive wilderness pleases me, so your fictional story cleared my head, returned me to Crete, Greece, and Cyprus, to my adventures with women with body hair and strong emotions. Keep it up.

I don't understand the argumentative comments that some readers make. They want to argue about the story or what the characters think or do or say... A story is just a hopefully colorful statement of something that occurred. The oddities and peccadilloes of people make the stories interesting. I'm thinking that people who don't write are the ones who make the critical comments. Also people just comment about the way the story makes them feel. If they feel good, then the story is good. If the story leaves them melancholy, then the story is bad. I hope you don't worry much about what people say about your stories as your writing is very pleasing to me.

Sophie and Dan live in adjoining houses. An erotic attraction develops, but then there is weird Tony. Who likes to watch -

Will they ever shake this guy. After all, who likes to be watched when you're busy - I ask you. A strange Romance - this is!

Very well written, and beleivable. I have read almost all of your stories and this the best so far. Keep up the Great writting.

It shows the relative nature of respect, integrity,etc.

She maintained the limits she agreed to with Tony while she enjoyed the options he requested her to - weird yep but honest. Until she let herself get pregnant - she broke the agreement - it was dishonest and lacked loyalty.

What was the choice - well tell Tony she wanted out of course - ah well we each make our own choices -

Clearly written and well laid out thanks -

Well written hoping there are

sequels to these fine tales!!

does turn out right....just a pity he had to move away to make it happen...but did she mean to trap him by getting pregnant.....at least it turned out in the end...only thing is he should leave the hairy pusy alone...I love a big hairy pussy.....

Charming story.

Interesting little story. AA++

Interesting that you write in some of your stories about men liking to watch a wife fiancee or just a girlfriend flaunting their bodies or going a lot further and having sex with another person. Always the comments are that the above would not happen. It does and I have been there and done that with my wife and friends. It is highly erotic and we are together as are our friends after 55years. Sadly our age means losses due to illness, but we are still very happy. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

Sorry, didn't say how much I enjoyed these two stories, Thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47