All Comments on 'Down the Rabbit Hole Pt. 01'

The title of your story is quite similar to Sadkins "illustrated" story series.

If you're not a regular reader, THAT may be a fair excuse. BUT otherwise, you seem to me to be cashing in on another author's ideas.

Gave you a "1" and would have pushed ZERO if there had been "that" option.

I wrote this story 4yrs ago in 3 parts.

I slimmed it down to 2.

I titled it down the rabbit hole because

That is how I feel about my sexual self.

In that she has fallen down a very deep hole

Of the unknown.

I can prove that I've had this story titled the way it is

For how long I've said, as I posted it on fetlife years ago.

Bella.

Love your writing, can't wait to read more!