All Comments on 'Downfall of King Wilfred the Chaste'

fwiw, i wish you'd introduced more struggle or slow, step-by-step corruption on the part of the king. i guess i just like stories that aren't about instant, complete control -- and are more about slow influence, etc. MIght not be your thing, but this particular story seemed well set up for such a plot.

anyway, thanks for writing it!