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All Comments on 'Downward Dog in Heat'

by hot_wrider

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visioneervisioneerover 6 years ago

What a sexy and sizzling story -- not to mention it is beautifully written. Your descriptions are superb and emotions come through strong. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good, but not quite great.

What your story seems to be missing is the description of the final orgasm at the end.

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