All Comments on 'Dr. Nix Ch. 03'

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brian358brian358over 11 years ago
Wow!

Things are getting *really* serious! What does the text say?

You can't stop there! My fingernails just won't hold out! :-)

... Well at least the condemned(?) man had a hearty last meal... The lovely Paula... Sigh...

She is really er... developing (Pun applied with a sledgehammer). Immaculate BJ skills *and* a 32G now.

However this works out, I hope she keeps up the practice and puts her *poor* daddy to great expense in new and ever larger bras!!! :-)

Thanks for a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice but.............

I enjoyed your first story very much as a man who loves natural large breasts. Didn't like your second story much and your third story doesn't make much sense to me... It seems throughout all third chapters, you compare the other women to Paula, as if she's the best thing since slice bread. She seems to be the ultimate busty package or at least she was until he conquered her at the beginning. I believe that's where you kind of screw up, at least, in my opinion. You put Paula on this high pedal stool and so far, none of the other woman compare to her. Dr. Nix already conquered the bustiest girl in your series, why would he fall back on smaller breasts?

Now if I were to do something like this, this chapter would had been the first chapter as he didn't get nothing but a mere blowjob from the bustiest girl. You could had have him fucked other busty women in between while building up to get into Paula's pants as his ultimate goal but he already did that way at the beginning.

In any case, nice job...

MakdaddyMakdaddyover 11 years ago
Love it!

Love the series - cannot wait for the next installment - keep up the good work

Lee2012Lee2012over 11 years ago
Chapter 04 - Dr Nix gets Nixed?

Loved it!! Hurry up with the mext one.

I know my dick will

Lee

l.smth3@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic

PLease Please continue this story. Very well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

is there ever going to be a part 4?

naiveslutsnaiveslutsabout 10 years agoAuthor
Yes there will be a part 4

I finally started it a few weeks ago

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ch 4

When will you post Ch 4?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
oh

Oh damn, this got real fast!! Make the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Some times you really top need to heed your suspicions,

Busted

MikebobMikebobabout 7 years ago

This is an amazing story very sexy you need to write ch.04

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Definitely need Ch 4

Great story - love it.

Bookmarked & waiting :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Greatest I've read in a long time on here!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Where is chapter 4?

When are you going to add chapter 4?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Great story so far, just hoping for chapter 4 to come..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
PLEASE FINISH THR NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Please finish the next chapter!! What did Jocelyn say? What is her plan???

Love this series!!

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