by uh-oh
Great story...right up my street...well written and imaginative. Oh, and erotic too, by the way! Thank you.
Probably one of my favorite stories of you so far.
I really like the idea of the reluctant, pure, girl being transformed by the monster's impregnation of her.
That, and her becoming its faithful mate.
I love stories like this. You did a very wonderful job as you always do. Perhaps you can do a fantasy version of Ashley's Dark Awakening? ^^ This was almost that, just add another elf that leads the main character into lizardman breeding. Hehe.
Seriously, it's murdering any immersion you can get out of this story.
Will you ever write a sequel to this? it's one of my favorite stories from you and one of the hottest! I'd LOVE to see this story continue.
amazing, as are the rest of your stories. i love the conquest element in them; her visualization of the lizardman's sperm corrupting her egg was beyond hot. looking forward to more of your writing!
U make me wish it was my dungeons and dragons character who is a female high elf ranger was also captured by the lizardmem and forced to mate with him until I give birth to his young.
i only have one problem with this, its too short and demands more, so much more. However....
While I found your prose to be a bit purple, your story is nonetheless quite entertaining and arousing. Thanks for sharing it!