All Comments on 'Dragon Clans Pt. 02'

This is really quite intriguing... very curious to see how Michael fits in with Ian and Millie, and just to see what happens. Well done.

This is just amazing! Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next. VERY impressive writing!

but the lack of answers and the creation of more had me contemplating the possibility of not finishing the chapter. At least we found out how Sasha died, but that question wasn't on my list of questions, so it doesn't matter. Again, some editing work is needed, although this time less is needed than on the first.

this is a very intriguing start. really curious how this will develop, seeing how many chapters there already are i have enough reading material for a little while again :)

This needs to be relabeled as Bk 1 Pt 2. Wish it were that simple, thanx for your writing.

Good Story !!! But a major lack of respect for your readers as you perfect your craft . Happening way too often. If you are not dead etc. post a prelude and let readers know before you just abandon a story.You want loyal readers and comments stop being an asshole !!!