All Comments on 'Dragon (S)Layers Ch. 45'

Hey everyone!

I know you're probably getting tired of me, but I thought I'd mention I'm running a free download on amazon for the Paladin Gambit, so if you're curious about the book or want to give it to someone else who has a kindle, you can grab it here from the 17th to 19th: http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B014WNG10I

Thanks so much for your continued support!

I am all for a nice fantasy tale, but these two pages with tons of characters hoping back and forth GOT is less than stellar. This is a literotica website and there was some fantastic erotica early on. Now it seems like there is a dabble here and there otherwise I am reading a toned down Joe Abercrombie novel. It's losing me.

I don't blame you, and I understand that it's kind of an issue. . . I've been working on trying to find my stride and make it an enjoyable read, but I've got some work to do on it obviously. For what it's worth, there /is/ a fairly heavy bit of erotica planned for this volume. It hasn't kicked in just yet because I was trying to set up my stride here.

It's going to hit on Chapter 47 I believe and then it'll be more prolific going forward. The revisions are going to take time, sadly I 'have' (get to) work for a client of mine as well as write these updates and work on the main novels so it's always a delicate balancing act.

Regardless, there will be more smut going forward, fear not.

I am loving the complicated relationship between these two. Very interested to see what route you ultimately take it.

I will put my hand up in saying, yes, you've had some super-hot erotica in this story, but what keeps me coming back is the world, the plot, the mysteries to unfold, and the characters - and I am one who is not in need of sex every chapter. The story comes first, in my opinion. There should be no sex just for its own sake in a saga like this. That's what one-off stroke pieces are for. :)