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Click here"Shh," Lostariel put her finger to her lips and held her gaze for a moment. "If you were anyone else I would have killed you without a thought. But. . . .I find myself enjoying the challenge."
"What are you saying?"
The woman smiled wolfishly. "I want you to convince me she needs to be spared. Prove your point. Or die in the attempt."
Felicia stared at the woman who was still her friend, wondering just where she should start. But then it occurred to her that the 'challenge' she'd been given wasn't just a verbal one. She needed to earn her mentor's respect. Which meant a hell of a lot of things, but first and foremost it meant she was going to be moving a hell of a lot more rocks. Even knowing that, the little plainswalker met the assassin's gaze and said in the most resolute voice she could. "Then make me sweat and let's talk about it. . ."
- COMMENTS
DeathAndTaxesover 8 years agoI am loving the complicated relationship between these two. Very interested to see what route you ultimately take it.
I will put my hand up in saying, yes, you've had some super-hot erotica in this story, but what keeps me coming back is the world, the plot, the mysteries to unfold, and the characters - and I am one who is not in need of sex every chapter. The story comes first, in my opinion. There should be no sex just for its own sake in a saga like this. That's what one-off stroke pieces are for. :)
T_Silverwolfover 8 years agoAuthorI don't blame you, and I understand that it's kind of an issue. . . I've been working on trying to find my stride and make it an enjoyable read, but I've got some work to do on it obviously. For what it's worth, there /is/ a fairly heavy bit of erotica planned for this volume. It hasn't kicked in just yet because I was trying to set up my stride here.
It's going to hit on Chapter 47 I believe and then it'll be more prolific going forward. The revisions are going to take time, sadly I 'have' (get to) work for a client of mine as well as write these updates and work on the main novels so it's always a delicate balancing act.
Regardless, there will be more smut going forward, fear not.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI am all for a nice fantasy tale, but these two pages with tons of characters hoping back and forth GOT is less than stellar. This is a literotica website and there was some fantastic erotica early on. Now it seems like there is a dabble here and there otherwise I am reading a toned down Joe Abercrombie novel. It's losing me.
T_Silverwolfover 8 years agoAuthorHey everyone!
I know you're probably getting tired of me, but I thought I'd mention I'm running a free download on amazon for the Paladin Gambit, so if you're curious about the book or want to give it to someone else who has a kindle, you can grab it here from the 17th to 19th: http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B014WNG10I
Thanks so much for your continued support!
