All Comments on 'Dragon (S)Layers Ch. 61'

Gah! So good! And what a place for it to end! I like Leslie very much.

Would love to read the whole storie

Shame it seems to have come to a halt, I'd have liked to know how it was planned to work out.

The only criticism is you could really do with a careful editor to sort out the numerous trivial errors - spellings and wrong words e.g. pedal instead of petal etc - which seem odd in such otherwise good writing, Maybe turn off auto correct if it's on?

I appreciate real life can be rubbish, hope it's working out.

H

This is absolutely brilliant stuff, I’ve read through it non stop over the past few days. Heartbroken to have reached the end. I really hope you continue it. The world and characters are astounding.