All Comments on 'Dragonbride'

I'd like to see more but you could really use an editor.

You get'em girl.

Not 100% who I am talking about.

I am late for work because I got so enthralled in your story. It has. A good pacing the start was a tad cliche but over all just well written hope to see more.

A lot of delightful possibilities here. A pleasure to read!

This starts well and your writing is of a good standard. Both commendable on this site that has too many poor stories. Good twist with a female dragon. Now think about at least one surprise like that every other chapter and finish each one with a cliff hanger.

Personally, l think you rushed the muff munching for your main character. That could have been teased out over multiple chapters. While this site obviously has an expectation for it to occur your serving wench could have covered that - to use a bad pun. Don't rush the pious knight would be my advice.

And l agree with a previous anon, an editor would help with the few annoying typos.

Still, well done you on putting the effort in and getting this story up. Good for you.

Oh, this is good! If you should choose to write further chapters of this story, they'll be well received.

Please tell me there is more coming.

I'm not usually into this type of story but for some reason it drew me in. The pacing is brilliant and its ending is open to all kinds scenerio's. Please don't keep us waiting for a follow-up chapters

New to the site and you brought something quite different. Well done.

A lot of concepts in this. Well written. Thank you

I love a good string wench in any story and you didn't fail to deliver. I truly liked Isabella as a down to earth and sexually aware contrast to the arrogant dragon and spoilt princess. Good job.

More please.

Excellent! Show us how Taneth and her trio+ will evolve

That was a nice twist on a classic trope. Others have pointed out that you could benefit from an editor and I agree. But your typos weren't so frequent that they reduced my enjoyment if the story. Well done.

This was a very enjoyable, and verrrry sexy tale. Gotta love the character development.

Seems to me there should be more to this tale.

Would love to see more of this story. I can see the potential in it. Keep up the great work!

Very good Dragon Tale. Not sure some readers will agree with the lesbian aspect. But what the Hell, good sex is good sex no matter where it come from. Hope there's more chapters to this unfinished tale. 4 plus stars.

I also would enjoy reading more on this story.

more please

I gave this 5* thinking there would be further chapters, had I realised this was it I would only given 4