All Comments on 'Dragon's Hoard'

'supernatural' is not my usual thing...but this is a good story and very arousing...thank you!

I don't get it. The story was a little choppy but I don't get the story line

I didn't get it either. It was choppy in some places and repetitive rambling in run-on sentences in other places. I would suggest you have another person read your work before you post it.

Keep writing! Follow your Muse!

Is this all there is, or will there ever be more? Seems pretty nice, just.....wish there were a lot more. (As if this were a chapter or two in the middle of a book, I wish the rest of the book were somewhere (findable) to read.)