All Comments on 'Draining Daddy Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Far inferior to part 1

Nuff said!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

The end is just downright amusing. I usually don't smile this hard at the completion of a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sweet story

Improbable both genetically and socially (as things are at present), but I loved the strangeness and the jokes at the end! That Charon is one freaky dude … Do ghosts really make love with each other? If so, count me in as a subscriber!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

actually wouldn't mind a continuation of the end of this story, love history, and mythology, and him exploring the underworld, getting up to hijinx, maybe even having an afterlife harem could be fun :)

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