All Comments on 'Draught of Denial'

Well that was fucking hot. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us. 🔥

Well written. After reading it, I feel of two minds, as much as Beysa does.

To leave us on the edge of that story, so close to completion but left hanging and unfulfilled...

Bravo.

Well written and so sensuous. The description of the dark-haired woman applying the salve to her wet lips was so erotic.

Such erotic and interesting, creative thoughts, written beautifully and skillfully. Thanks so much.

Needs to continue but excellent intro to both characters,go deeper

Brilliant...

this was so good

Please.....please more