All Comments on 'Dream'

damn i wish this was longer , thank you . can there be more of these 2 ? please

...and you can write (and very well too). Your descriptive writing of the sea trip to the island is first-rate and the sexual content nicely erotic. It would be good to think that there will be a follow-up to this story---will there?

Sorry, I started the story, loved the richness of the descriptions, then suddenly hit with "you did this" "you did that" Second person only works in dialogue. Works for some, but not for all. Maybe it is a control thing. The reader is mot a part of the story, or would already know the story, the reader is an observer, a voyeur if you will.

What a read. Your description of the ferry trip and Laird's house is so well written. I hope you consider continuing this story because you have created two mysterious characters. Well done.

I hope there's more coming up.

Loved the build up to the conclusion. Howver, I feel less time should have been spent on desriptors of boats, the sea & marine life, the island, etc and more on the connection between reality and a dream that just may be..

Love it

i loved everything about it...

on to your other stories...

many thanks!