All Comments on 'Dream Come True'

by Ryan283

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
A good start

Perhaps with Adam leaving her for another woman, she would be prone to being seduced further into a lengthy relationship that might not include birth control, for future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Lovely

How you write! You took my breath away with this story.

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