All Comments on 'Dream Come True'

A well written story of what must have been a wonderful experience. Hopefully we will see more fom this author very soon.

...I must admit that this is a fictional story, but the people in it are certainly real.

I mostly wrote this for own satisfaction, and hopefully you guys get something out of it as well. This is the first time I've ever written erotic literature, so of course I would appreciate any comments and constructive criticism. Expect more in the future as I improve my storytelling ;)

Things like this can happen in the right circumstances.

I loved this story as it mad me horny, and I wish I was the one getting my ass fucked. I hope you right a follow up to this story

Add a follow-up, you cockloving bitch. This made me so horny. Do another one or I'll fuck you.

Soooo good 8====D~~ O;

One of our fave fantasies. The only thing missing is the coach hearing the yelling and coming in, seeing them finishing shooting off their loads and saying, "I'll take seconds." and getting a blowjob or piece of ass from one of the guys

I would prefer the coach getting a piece of ass from both of the guys and then double penetrating one after the other.

Just ran into your writings today. Loved this. It is hot and kept me hard. Since you have started writing again - after a few years off - maybe you will continue to share your talent. I for one hope so.

princecharming420 is a very good writer.